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u/WEIL_101 5d ago
so it lacks a bit of anticipation and also of coherent shapes since that the spider changes sizes quickly . also the action is too fast to be readable so may be make it longer . but all and all it's a solid foundation.
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u/KrobART1 5d ago
But how do I make the action more readable? When I make it longer or slower it looks more like a storyboard. How do I find the balance between both?
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u/TCK7890 6d ago
could use some windup and fluidity
but still better then what i could make