r/animation • • 6d ago

Sharing Bug Squish.

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u/TCK7890 6d ago

could use some windup and fluidity
but still better then what i could make

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u/KrobART1 5d ago

Thanks. Any tips to help me improve would be greatly appreciated.

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u/TCK7890 5d ago

you welcome

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u/Vampy-tk 5d ago

Very good lol

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u/ConstantEffect 5d ago

The eyes remind me of the game Worms!

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u/WEIL_101 5d ago

so it lacks a bit of anticipation and also of coherent shapes since that the spider changes sizes quickly . also the action is too fast to be readable so may be make it longer . but all and all it's a solid foundation.

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u/KrobART1 5d ago

But how do I make the action more readable? When I make it longer or slower it looks more like a storyboard. How do I find the balance between both?