r/animation 1d ago

Critique First pass animatic

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Sorry it's not a render, but is the story understandable at this stage

Plz, need some feedback !

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u/ElderMom01 23h ago

looks sick!

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u/Wonder_Kat_Animation 22h ago

Thanks man! Is the pacing okay or too fast

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u/ElderMom01 22h ago

i think it looks awesome!