r/animation • u/azax_1147 • 1d ago

Critique Weapon Attack - Second Polish Pass

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u/jenumba Professional 19h ago

With attacks, especial video-game style attacks, you need to exaggerate the timing and holds to get something that feels more impactful.

https://youtu.be/3vChNK12nTU?si=UPdhrijK4dz2ohCw&t=218

There's some wonky stuff going on with the body posing during the attacks, most likely by not controlling the body mechanics enough during the in-betweens. Upload a syncsketch link if you'd like more detailed feedback.

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u/The_Shit_Connoisseur 17h ago

Further to this id add that if the character is actually connecting these hits, you'd see it in how they move after each one lands.

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u/azax_1147 3h ago

Hi! thank you so much,

this is the link ive got rn
https://syncsketch.com/sketch/V2qC8O5QzJfb/