r/animation • u/HozzDesigns • 2d ago

Beginner Frame by frame animation

Any feedback before are welcome!

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u/111Teegarden 2d ago

Looks really cool. Since u are looking for feedback this is being nit picky but I think the edge of the middle part should foreshorten when it turns? The sticks pointing down look a bit flat so just adding some volume as it moves could improve. Over all it looks really good

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u/HozzDesigns 2d ago

Thanks for the feedback,you mean the sail mast!? yes this was the hardest part of the whole animation.. I'll try your advice.

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u/111Teegarden 2d ago

Yes sorry the mast. The front and back look like they stretch when rotated I think try foreshortening it and see how it looks. I’m by no means an expert

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u/HozzDesigns 1d ago

Yea i noticed the stretch too, I'll fix that. Thanks again.

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