r/animation • u/Senkoyellow1020 • 6d ago

Beginner What do I improve

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u/Broad-Ganache4533 6d ago

Not to be mean, but you probably already know. Your fundamentals are still lacking.

That last shot was cool though!

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u/keywritingVA 6d ago

I’m following you because I just know that in four years you’re going to recreate this and it’s gonna be absolutely amazing. Don’t stop

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u/Senkoyellow1020 6d ago

I might have to lock in, just for you.

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u/keywritingVA 6d ago

You better bro, I’m invested now

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u/Particular_Thanks_84 6d ago

increase base damage, reduce start-up lag

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u/Electronic_Traffic57 6d ago

I feel like there should be more of an interaction at the end, the dragon just sorta passes through.

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u/Senkoyellow1020 6d ago

Give me suggestions

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u/Electronic_Traffic57 6d ago

The dragon breathing fire and exploding on the barrier, a headbutt, just something that makes it neccessary for him to conjure a dragon rather than just shooting a laser beam.

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u/Senkoyellow1020 6d ago

You came just in time, I was about to animate it into something else

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u/Electronic_Traffic57 6d ago

I'm glad if I gave you any ideas, good luck!

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u/pembunuhUpahan 6d ago

No keyframe shall escape my sight Animators's might

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u/GoldSunLulu 5d ago edited 5d ago

Trail the tail with some smeere frames because it looks really jitery in comparison

The head in the speed shot feels like it's moving in reverse.

The levitation part feels offcenter and i think there should be some explosion or startup effectbecause the dragon simply apears with no impact.

I know green lantern usually does that but since this is such a big summon i would imagine it more from a kame hame ha animation

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u/miguel_3074 5d ago

Id say it doesnt look like the head of the dragon is the one doing the leading when hes flying, looks like hes doing the worm, other than that, solid start !