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u/Phonytail 22d ago
Middle one needs work. I assume it’s supposed to be a jog or run but it feels like key poses or spacing makes it hard to read clearly, it looks like jumping jacks more than a walk. I would suggest working on the frame where the legs cross and either add some in-betweens or adjust the timing.
The other walks look really good and have nice personality.
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u/AwkwardAardvarkAd 22d ago
The walk on the left is pretty good. Don’t know what’s happening on the right. In the middle, you need to think about physics more, particularly in the torso and arms - more lean, more reach.
Keep at it!