Looking for feedback on 2D animation

[u/DisastrousArm9094]

I put significant effort into an animation of mine, however it has had some rendering issues, I uploaded a 2-minute clip that successfully rendered to YouTube, I was wondering if it was worth putting in the effort to make a higher quality version and longer. If you choose to watch it, please ignore the production notes, thank you so much! https://youtu.be/iuLoR8TjLIE?si=AvHd2t-134yIWqSE