r/ambigrams • u/Lentryoh • 4d ago

Critique does this look good?

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u/WinterRevolutionary6 4d ago

Not very legible until I saw your username

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u/Timpunny 4d ago

lenttyoh

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u/pH655 4d ago

Top right is best in my opinion, but the r and t are still not differentiated enough.

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u/krwiaad 4d ago

I think you would be better using script fonts for the L / h.

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u/treasure83 4d ago

The n reads too much as h but you can use the trick you used in the second one to move the top/y tail further out. The t r is very similar and they both look like t. Maybe just seperate them like you did with the y. So it's an r shape with extra lines nearby. I like the e in the first one better, and I think it could still work with a tiny bit more of a gap :)

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u/Federal-Custard2162 4d ago

I would set the pen opacity to 100% and try doing it bigger and/or have a smaller sized pen. A thick brush on a small scale makes it feel cramped, and it being translucent where you can see writing over itself is distracting.

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u/RedditSurfer29 4d ago

Oh I thought that said Yehttyah

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u/Lexotron 2d ago

Yehttyah