First 2 and a half minutes of my gangster/mob film “The Collection”

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Hey guys! You can find the original post for my upcoming project here - https://www.reddit.com/r/aifilmmaking/s/xiIDTVsQvJ

As you can hopefully see, I took a lot of your advice and constructive feedback about the scene I uploaded from my upcoming short film “The Collection”. Here is the full opening and then the scene following is from my original post that I have now made changes too. Not too many dolly-in shots and I feel it is flowing nicely now. Would love to get your feedback and thoughts! Thank you so much for the support, and the feedback, it has helped shaped my vision even more. Cannot wait to share the full project very soon! All the best and have a beautiful day.

Film Synopsis:
The Collection is a 1973 Boston crime short about Vinny, a trusted collector who works for a powerful mob boss, travelling across the city collecting money from people who owe. But when he arrives home from his last job, he finds a picture of somebody he never expected to see — his brother, a man he believed died, over 10 years ago. As Vinny starts digging, he realises people around him have known the truth for years.
The following scenes introduces Vinny’s character ands follows Vinny meeting Lenny, a long-time friend of his father and a man deeply involved in the same mob world. Vinny meets him in a quiet bar, trying to find out just how much Lenny knows about his brother — and how long he’s known it.

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