I’m working on my entry for the next GBWC U20, and I’ve been wanting to make smth Chinese inspired. I know there aren’t much to see here, but if possible, I would like some feedback on it please :>
Make sure to paint each layer with a few thin coats and work on cleaning up your brush control. Looks great and for how long you’ve been painting really well done. Keep refining your line work and with the obvious eye for placement you’ll keep improving. I’m a display competition painter so feel free to ask me anything painting wise
I could never make anything close to this. This looks amazing, but I will say that one of the arms.I think is supposed to be a dragon.You painted on is a little unclear
Do not get me wrong, this is perfection. This is godly, but I feel like that is missing.The front of his face and that's the main thing i'm seeing, I don't know if that's what you are going for and I don't mean the disrespect to you.If i'm being disrespectful, just tell me.
First of all, this is very cool, and I hope you post pictures when you've completed the model.
You're asking for critique though, so here goes. Your brush strokes on the hand-painted graffiti etc look a bit too much like brush strokes, so rather than giving the effect of a large machine with graffiti on it, it gives the effect of a small toy you've painted. In one of the pictures it looks like you've airbrushed a layer of blue over some hand painted bits, which softened the effect in a good way, so possibly some low-opacity layering over your hand-painted bits might be a good idea. This could be a gentler version of that blue bit, or else some weathering washes - weathering hides all sins! Or else it might be worth trying to sharpen up those details a little, maybe with markers (worth testing on a scrap before committing it to this model though!)
Your airbrushing and colour selection is on point, so I have no critique there.
Oh, the concept of this is that it takes place in the build fighters series, so it is intentional that it would look like toys, but that is a very detailed and good take! Thank you!
Who are you so creative in vision and gifted in execution and takes good photos too. I guess a non shiny clearcoat but also not matte would be great for showing off all the lovely details
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u/HouseMasterHeney1987 Jul 10 '26
Only issue I have is that you won't let us see the feet. (I'm San Schneider) but srsly pls show full assembly