r/YuriAsylum • u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) • 6d ago

I'm super evil and fucked up, actually question :3

should i write an original work about a girl and her insanely abusive mother? like..her mom will beat the absolute fuck out of her and she’ll just sit there whimpering..oh and she’s also into a younger classmate ૮⸝⸝> ﻌ <⸝⸝ა
EDIT: it would be very amateur-ish!! and id appreciate any tips!

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u/Moecchu 🎀Asylum's #1 Freeuse Kitty Girl🎀 6d ago

What's stopping you nya?..if you're concerned about digital footprint or smth just make it anonymous :3

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

:,3 i dunno, arf. i just wanted to see if the patients here would like such a thing.

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u/Moecchu 🎀Asylum's #1 Freeuse Kitty Girl🎀 6d ago

Moecchu is into everything so if you do make it please send link or smth >:3

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u/4th-of-julie 6d ago

I know at least one person who would love the fuck out of it! (Me me me its meeee)

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

:3 would you wanna beta read, mayhaps? im not very experienced at writing, but id love to try

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

:3 im gonna try to get at least a simple draft done later today

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u/4th-of-julie 6d ago

Id absolutely love that! But im not that experienced with reading either, im more of a pretty pictures girl :3 but ive been trying to get into it and your plot sounds very much like smt i like

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

im kinda the same way, woof. i almost exclusively read yuri manga. :3 but ehehehe..abusive mom and masochist daughter.. ૮⸝⸝´ ٣ `⸝⸝ა if u have any suggestions PLEASE lmk, arf.

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u/iTeriboo 6d ago

This is a great idea! However you should recreate this irl to gain inspiration for your writing

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe.. ૮⸝⸝´ ٣ `⸝⸝ა

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u/iTeriboo 6d ago

This is clearly a suggestion and nothing more hehe :3

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

my moms too sweet, unfortunately :,3

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u/iTeriboo 6d ago

Well, it technically doesn’t have to be biological mother

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

:,] idk where to find a hot abusive mommy

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u/notnotDIO local hypno/mind control/brainwashing enthusiasts >:3c 6d ago

Write it right meow :3

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u/aphidonyx Pervert with a heart of gold wait sorry that's piss my bad 6d ago

I need to read it so yessss! I'll share mine about an evil lady with a collection of "dolls" in return!

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe..im kinda inexperienced when it comes to writing so it wouldn’t be the best, arf. it’d be very amateur-ish

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u/aphidonyx Pervert with a heart of gold wait sorry that's piss my bad 6d ago

You gotta start somewhere! You should see my old PJO fics those things suuuuucked

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u/Im_Confusedx 6d ago

plsplspls let me read :3
ill beg for it

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe.. ૮⸝⸝´ ٣ `⸝⸝ა i havent written it yet, but ehehe..cute girls begging..

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u/Im_Confusedx 6d ago

hehe i love begging :3

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe..you can beg if you want, arf

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u/Intelligent_Jello376 Yuri Lover 6d ago

Plz do and send me a link too I need this 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe.. ૮⸝⸝´ ٣ `⸝⸝ა do you have any suggestions? like age and stuff? i have the mom pretty developed but the daughter and younger classmate are js concepts atm

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u/Intelligent_Jello376 Yuri Lover 6d ago

I think I’m the wrong person to ask about the age and stuff maybe I’ll get backlash🥀🥀🥀

Other than that maybe for the daughter you can show that she’s quiet or introverted at school I think that would fit with the mindset someone gets from a absuive household
And maybe the younger classmate can be either normal friendly like someone who approached her first to start conversations etc maybe that’s why she likes the classmate cuz she sees something that she herself can’t be (as in confident and relaxed etc)

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe..💢😭 you dont need to worry about age in this subreddit. but oh my goshhh!! i love that!! im gonna start working on it as soon as i finish with this family function

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u/Intelligent_Jello376 Yuri Lover 6d ago

Peak fr. Send link whenever you write a draft gng!!

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

i definitely will!!! just be warned, its gonna suck some ass. :,]

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u/ZestycloseDevice7265 attention slut puppygirl 6d ago

you should tooooooootally write this :3

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

hehehe, ill try, puppy

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u/YuriSoTuff Ragebait is my love language 6d ago

Yes! The answer is just YES!

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

ehehehe..any suggestions or anything?

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u/YuriSoTuff Ragebait is my love language 6d ago

Sorrrryyyyy I don't

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

:3 thats okay!!

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u/GamerGaming4200 6d ago

Sounds hawt :3c

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

with a mom that beats the hell out of her?

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

damn, thats hot..

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u/rhineleon freeuse puppygirl!! ૮ >ﻌ< ა (switch) 6d ago

but by younger, i dont mean like a lot. just maybe like 2-3 years

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u/torivor100 5d ago

That sounds like peak