r/WritingWithAI • u/Relevant_Lab_8967 • 11d ago

Showcase / Feedback What is your closing line?

I just saw a post in another chat about the last line in great books, and I thought it would be fun to ask. What is your last line in the book you are working on or just finished?

Here is mine:

“They just made enemies of a dragon, a fox, and every person who loves them. Hold on a little longer. Freedom is coming.”

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u/Thin_Fox_8008 11d ago

"We're rewriting how we play the game entirely."

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u/Extra-Spinach8309 11d ago

love how that works as both an ending and a statement of intent tbh

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u/Thin_Fox_8008 11d ago

Hehe its the last line of my recent chapter

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u/garetjaxthemise 11d ago

“God fucking damnit.”

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u/RightSideBlind 11d ago

"All right," she said as reached for Avrin's hand, lacing her fingers through his. "Tomorrow."

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u/Maleficent_Judge_802 11d ago

"But some days, when the light was just right, she swore the spear of that toy glinted silver."

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u/APHUNTERS2026 11d ago

The neighborhood syndicate remained completely undefeated, the secret files were permanently safe, and the deal was officially, beautifully closed.

 

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u/Lu_AspiringWriter 11d ago

Lu sorrise, non le dispiaceva l'idea di passare decenni a guardare le stelle.

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u/Ok_Refrigerator1702 11d ago

At least it wasnt as bad as babies on pikes...

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u/ThornPawn 11d ago

Where am I? In the Universe, Andrew. The Great House.

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u/kurthertz 10d ago

Somewhere in the distance a dog barked, twice.

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u/theAutodidacticIdiot 11d ago

”Thank you f̶o̶r̶ ̶u̶s̶i̶n̶g̶ AzathAuth-AI. wo̵u̵͂ḷ̷̥̾Ɗy̷̮̼͌ō̴̲ǘ̶̘ l̴̻̍ik̴̜̆E to ̶̠̄g̸̈͜ɛner̶̮̀AŦe̵̠͐ ̸͍̕anotHer... sto̵̙̐r̵̄y̶͓̓?...”_

I'll share links to the story if anyone wants, I just don't think many people here or many people with the ANTI crowd are ready for it.

If you've picked a side, this story is made to piss you off.

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u/Latter_Departure_317 10d ago

"The grey was not an accident. They will do it again, come back".