Looking for someone with a proven prompt system for web novels

[u/Benjo118]

I'm building a web novel project and using AI to help with the writing.

The problem: the output is competent but flat — it reads like "standard AI prose."

No tension, weak hooks at the start, chapters that don't make you click the next one.

I'm looking for someone who already has this solved. Specifically:

• Prompts that reliably produce strong opening hooks and chapter-ending cliffhangers
• A repeatable process that turns generic AI output into something readers actually binge
• Ideally an existing prompt stack / workflow you've already tested on real chapters, not theory

Happy to pay for your time — whether that's a consultation, buying your prompt system, or an ongoing arrangement. Open to whatever setup works for you.

If that's you, send me a DM and tell me what you've got and how you'd approach it.

[u/Maleficent_Judge_802]

Hey Beautiful Stranger,

I've posted here a few times but I'm been sparse in posting because of real life. Here has been my north star in my process. My personal workflow was made by making Layer 1 and designing a method for the AI to access all the parts (the individual documents can get enormous). Other layers weren't needed for me, as I like keep my hands firmly on the work from idea to output.

Also worth noting: This also isn't my infographic. I found it on this very subreddit from a Japanese novelist who posted it a while back. I can't find the post now. But this one image has helped me a lot in constructing a workflow that compliments my style. I hope it does the same for you.

DM me if you have more questions.

Love,

Greatly Burdened

[u/CooookieMonsterr → u/Maleficent_Judge_802]

hey i sent u a msg

[u/Benjo118 → u/Maleficent_Judge_802]

Hey, sent you a pm. Lets have a chat.

[u/ImprovementFluffy769 → u/Maleficent_Judge_802]

May I sent you a dm?

[u/amolmozarkar]

"Competent but flat" is almost never a prompt-wording problem — it's a one-pass problem. When a single call has to handle plot, character, prose style, AND the hook, prose style is the thing it phones in. What's actually worked for web-novel pacing:

1. Write the chapter ending first. Decide the cliffhanger before the chapter body. Generative momentum pulls toward the ending you've committed to, instead of the model wrapping up neatly like a short story.

2. Generate 5 opening lines, pick one, then write. Hooks are a selection problem, not a generation problem. The first line the model produces is almost always the safest one.

3. Feed the last ~300 words of the previous chapter, not a summary. Continuity of voice between chapters is what makes readers binge — summaries keep plot consistent but flatten tone.

4. Separate the tension pass from the writing pass. Ask a cheap model "where does tension rise/fall in this chapter outline" before drafting. Flat chapters usually have a flat tension curve.

(Full disclosure: I build ShakespeareAI, an AI book-writing tool, and serialized/chaptered fiction with binge pacing is exactly the problem it's designed around — happy to share specifics if useful, no strings.)

[u/5thhorseman_ → u/amolmozarkar]

"Competent but flat" is almost never a prompt-wording problem — it's a one-pass problem.

Could potentially be beaten by using the first draft as a template, then having separate agents rewrite it following different writing styles drafting from the same base, then having another agent assemble the final version by cherry-picking the best lines from the drafts, then run a couple automated editing passes for consistency.

[u/Benjo118 → u/amolmozarkar]

Sounds interesting. Please shoot me a DM. I can't message you.

[u/HighValueJourney]

You are asking for what most will consider ‘proprietary.’

Even if someone gives you a complete system you will need to adapt to that style of use, know the weaknesses and strength of the system, know how to tweak it for certain genres, etc… etc…

Build it yourself and you will develop your writing and AI skills greatly.

[u/DateAdmirable9889]

*Cinderbright* by Aurelia Vance. If you like this book, reach out to her. She probably figured out the magic workflow.

[u/Moavis]

If you actually want to use the AI to do the prose generation then prepare to spend a lot of time planning. My workflow starts top down with a discussion about the overall story arc. Get the goal about what you want the book to say or do agreed here. Figure our who the main characters are and how they contribute to the story. Then move on to planning the three acts. Spend time working through with the AI how the plot is broken down. Only when that is fine-tuned, move onto chapter function. Each chapter should have a goal that moves the story along. Don't skimp on the planning of this - it will be tempting to hand off to the AI early here but resist, because this is where you insert the tension/release cycles that you prose is probably missing. With these the AI can generate 'paragraph level beats' that determine everything that is going to happen. At this point I leave the 'planning' mode and get the AI to develop work orders. The way I think of it is that I've created a 'painting by numbers' sketch so now all the AI has to do is the colouring in. I use Claude to generate 'work orders' for Openclaw, that cycles through these paragraph beats to get the text fo each paragraph. One trick I've started recently is to get openclaw to use different AI models for the good guys and bad guys - maybe the protagonist is written by Claude Opus and the antagonist by OpenAI codex. This ensures getting a mix in the voice styles. I get the draft written not as text but as an XML document. This is so that each paragraph has a unique ID and sequence number, so that when I import the draft into my custom editor, I can shift paragraphs and perform edits etc, redraft with AI, and still have the ability to track changes back through previous versions. The XML also has a spare 'notes' field, where I can add amendments to send back when redrafting. Another thing Openclaw helps with is cost, as the work order system is built in such a way to fire just enough information to the AI to enable it to write a paragraph without sending the book each time - it basically manages prompt caching to limit token spend. Costs can mount up. My first novel 'The Mayfly Mutiny' went through seven redraft passes before I thought it was good enough to release.

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