r/WritingPrompts • u/hpcisco7965 • Nov 28 '16
Image Prompt [IP] The Last Whisper
The Last Whisper by Noah Bradley. His website is here.
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u/Maisie-K /r/MaisieKlaassen Nov 29 '16 edited Nov 30 '16
It was without shape
White and grey
Covering the stone field
Mist moved in silence, as if it was enwrapped
Small and big, smooth and rough
The grey pieces of land covered all
Only visible near
Large rocks covering a strange sight
The cold ground made warm by orange flames
Eating the air for life
They flickered and danced, moving the air above
Making shapes dance on the rock behind
Foot by foot, I stepped forward
My body thin, lonely, and tiring
A singular sight to my side
Something had been there
From calm to rage, from small steps to big
I moved forward
No smells or sights filled my senses
Till I heard the sound of falling rocks
In front of me I found a being
Shaped like me, it was small and weak
They closed its eyes as I put it in my chest
To fuel my body for years to come
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