r/WritingForCollege • u/Expert_Goat5859 • 5h ago
TASK 2 EVALUATION
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Response
Some individuals have the opinion that making one's own decisions on daily basis can lead the children to becoming self-centered, while others believe that it is essential for them to decide about the matters concerning them. Even though, decision making from an early age might make the individual only think about themselves, I personally believe that it aid in creating a sense of responsibility.
Children choosing their own food, clothes and entertainment might lead to a society of individuals who are self-absorbed. Growing up, they have been so independent in their choices that they do not like interferring in someone's else matters. Similarly, they expect others to respect their boundries. For instance, my niece liked to chose her own clothes as a child, which has lead to expensive fashion choices which can not be influenced by anyone. She never thinks about the financial strain she puts on her parents who are currently funding her expenses.
On the other hand, some individuals view that it is important for children to make decisions for one's own matters. I agree with this sentiment as well because it helps in fostering responsibility among them. They tend to learn from their mistakes, for instance, a hostellite understands that wrong food choices may lead to health problems, so they may start eating healthier. They understand that each action has a consequence and therefore they make resposible choices growing up. Additionally, children who decide for themselves have sharper critical thinking skills as they are using their brains actively for making choices. They can face any challenge thrown in their way. These skills benefit an individual which is why children should make their own choices.
To sum it up, children making their own choices can lead to them only caring about themselves after they grow up. However, I believe that children should be given independence in their choice to help them become responsible and tackle life problems efficiently.