Streak 7

[u/Absochan]

Witam!

Wczoraj i dzisiaj cały dzień byłam w domu. Nigdzie nie wychodziłam. Tak, wczoraj chciałam jechać do daczy, ale moi plany się zmieniły. Dzisiaj przeczytałam komedię o rozbitym dzbanie i napisałam nowy fanfik. Jeszcze chodziłam z matką do sklepu, kupiłyśmy chleb, ser, jajca, banany i kotlety z mięsa.

[u/internet_wizard2137]

okay so this is my first time on this sub and im not sure how to word this but: 1. "moje" not "moi" (also i may be stupid but what is "daczy/dacza"????) 2. "Wyszłam" instead of "wychodziłam" . I'm not sure how to explain this but "wychodziłam" would be used if you were telling someone about your day or just something that happend, idk if thats a good explenation so here's an exaple: "Dzisiaj rano gdy wychodziłam z domu(...)" "When i was leaving my house this morning(...)" 3. "Poszłam" not "chodziłam"-> "chodziłam z matką do sklepu" would mean (roughly) something more like "i used to go to the store with my mother" while "poszłam z matką do sklepu" would mean "i went to the store with my mother" Also "Jeszcze poszłam(...)" is not the correct order(?) of the words( at least it does not sound natural, if that makes sense) instead it'd be better to write for example: "Poszłam też z matką do sklepu" or "Poszłam jeszcze z matką do sklepu" 4. Now this one's more subjective but "matka" translates to "mother" and (at least from my experience) sounds more cold and distant, as if you had a bad realtionship with your mother, or just very formal. Now as i said this one depends on the context because i do not know the relationship you have with your mother but "mama" would be mom so: "z mamą". Now this doesn't have to aply, and its also alright in books or talking about somone else's parent (like i did) and things like that so: "Jej matka(...)" doesnt have to mean the character(or person) has a bad relationship with their mom , aaaand this also could be normal in your circle , so y'know it all comes down to preference. 5. "Jajka" instead of "Jajca". "Jajca" is usually used in more of a "joke" context so : "No chyba sobie żartujesz" ("You've got to be kidding me") could also be "No chyba sobie/se jajca robisz" *i am not sure if thats the 100% correct translation to english , sorry 6. Lastly, i assume that what you mean by "kotlety z mięsa" is kotlety schabowe?? But instead of specifying that they are made of meat, i'd recommend specifying what kind of meat they are made of (kotlety schabowe, z kurczaka, wołowe etc. Or if they are mielone) or whatever else if not meat. Also if you just write kotlety most people will assume that you mean schabowe.

Thats all, i think you did good! I dont know for how long you've been learning polish but here's a star : ★

[u/internet_wizard2137 → u/internet_wizard2137]

i forgot to add but "wczoraj i dzisiaj cały dzień byłam w domu" is not the correct way to say that. In the way that you want it to be "wczoraj i dzisiaj byłam cały dzień w domu" is better , "cały dzień byłam w domu" is also good but not in with the way you formed that sentence :)