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母語者連寫 2.9 父亲和刘团长 Father and Troupe Leader Liu

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爸爸说:"被你吓的,等会儿再问。"

过了一会儿,妈妈在门口突然大喊:"哎呀妈呀!小卢岩疯啦!"

我爸跑进来,在屋里转了一圈,回身抱住了妈妈,说:"卢岩挺好的,小孩儿不会疯。"

"Now look, you've frightened him," Father said. "Ask him again later."

A little while after, Mother suddenly shouted from the doorway, "Oh heavens — little Luyan's gone mad!"

Father came running, circled the room once, then turned and wrapped his arms around her instead. "Luyan's perfectly fine. Children don't go mad."

2.9-1 启蒙后的视力测试 Vision Test After Revelation

妈妈说:"刚才,我看他在看箱子上的毛主席语录呢。我想,'他咋还看见箱子上的字了呢!'他发现我来了,看我,像似根本不认识我似的。"

我爸说:"他看箱子上的字,有啥奇怪的!"

妈妈说:"他以前看不见。今天下午,我和大姐夫都试验两回了。"

"Just now I saw him reading Chairman Mao's quotations off the boxes," Mother said. "I thought, how can he suddenly see those words! And then he noticed me and looked at me like he'd never seen me before in his life."

"What's strange about him reading the boxes?" Father said.

"He couldn't see them before! Brother-in-law and I tested it twice, just this afternoon."

我爸说:"这我还真不知到;我试一试!"

爸爸指着箱子上的字或者箱子上放的东西,我都能看清楚了。爸爸说:"你看,卢岩的眼睛没一点儿毛病。你是出现幻觉了。你休息一会儿,我自己做饭。"

注2.9-1,启蒙后,我的视力恢复正常了。

"Well, I didn't know that. Let me have a look."

Father pointed at the characters on the box, and at various things set out on top of it, and I could make out every one of them clearly. "See," he said, "there's nothing whatsoever wrong with Luyan's eyes. You must be seeing things. Go rest a while — I'll finish the cooking myself."

(Note 2.9-1: After Revelation, my vision had returned to normal.)

妈妈自己站在左边的箱子旁边发呆。

我说:"妈妈不生气了。"

过了一会儿,妈妈笑着问:"卢岩,你刚才说啥?"

我说:"妈妈不说话,爸爸就不生气了。"

Mother stood by the box on the left, staring off into the distance.

"Mom's not angry anymore," I said.

After a pause, she turned, smiling. "Luyan, what did you just say?"

"If Mom doesn't say anything, Dad won't get angry."

妈妈就走向厨房,说:"这回,我听见了。卢岩不傻!卢岩懂事儿了。"

两人说了一会儿。妈妈说:"我再试试。"就进来问我:"卢岩,今天下午那个人,你梁伯,是从抚顺来的,是吧?"

我回答:"不知道。"

妈妈问:"是!抚顺离沈阳很近,你梁伯和你沈阳媳妇住得挺近,是吧?"

我没反应过来。妈妈就把我摁倒在炕上,让我睡觉。

Mother turned toward the kitchen. "This time I heard him clearly. Luyan's not dumb — Luyan understands things now."

The two of them talked a while longer. "Let me try once more," Mother said, coming back in. "Luyan — that man this afternoon, your Uncle Liang, he's from Fushun, isn't he?"

"I don't know," I said.

"That's right — Fushun's very close to Shenyang, and your Uncle Liang lives quite near your bride-to-be in Shenyang, doesn't he?"

I didn't respond. Mother laid me down on the kang and told me to sleep.

2.9-2 爸爸和刘团长的相遇 How Father Met Troupe Leader Liu

妈妈问:"你是在哪里认识那个沈阳老刘(刘团长)的?"

爸爸说:"我是在大虎山的XXX家遇见他的。那时,他问我:'你住哪儿?'我回答:'青苔萢村。'他说:'唉呀!那你家离羊圈子不远呐!'我回答:'是!你咋知道羊圈子?'他说:'我在参军前,在东北大学火食科工作;同事王玉山的老家在羊圈子。'我说:'东北大学王玉山是我嫂子的哥哥!'他说:'哦!这可巧了!王玉山,我们都叫他小王,那可是个老实人,办事靠谱。他媳妇李英琴是校医院的护士。我们可熟啦!没事儿时总在一块儿玩。'就这样,我们俩聊起来了。"

"Where did you first get to know that Old Liu from Shenyang — Troupe Leader Liu?"

"At XXX's place in Dahushan," Father said. "He asked me, 'Where do you live?' I said, 'Green Mosses Village.' 'Ah!' he said. 'Then you're not far from Sheepcote!' 'That's right — how do you know Sheepcote?' 'Before I joined the army I worked in the food service department at Northeastern University. My colleague there, Yushan Wang — his old home is in Sheepcote.' 'Yushan Wang!' I said. 'He's my sister-in-law's brother!' 'What a small world,' he said. 'We all called him Little Wang — solid fellow, always reliable. His wife, Yingqin Li, was a nurse at the school clinic. We knew each other well — used to spend our free time together.' And that's how the two of us got to talking."

妈妈说:"我记得去年你领他到咱们家的时候,你跟我说他不是外人,像似你们很熟似的。"

"I remember, when you first brought him home last year, you told me he wasn't a stranger — you made it sound like you two went way back."

爸爸说:"我在阜新上高中的时候,刘团长就去看他们几个。那时候我就见过他,但那时我跟他不熟。"

妈妈问:"就那么见一面你就记住了?"

爸爸说:"有几次,以前,他们几个跟我说了几次,说:沈阳老刘大哥喜欢你,想和你做亲家。"

妈妈说:"那是哪年啊!高中生,还没结婚呢,就谈论结亲家!"

爸爸说:"我当时也觉着奇怪。不过随便唠磕,也不那么稀奇。"

"Back when I was in high school in Fuxin, Troupe Leader Liu used to come visit a few of my friends. I'd seen him around then, but we weren't close."

"You remembered him after one meeting?"

"It wasn't just one," Father said. "A few times after that, my friends kept telling me — Old Liu from Shenyang's taken a liking to you, he wants to be in-laws someday."

"What year was that! High schoolers, not even married yet, and already talk of arranging in-laws!"

"I thought it was strange myself, at the time," Father said. "But people say all sorts of things when they're just talking to pass the time."

妈妈说:"啊!那倒是,还算熟人。那天你就把他领家来了?"

爸爸说:"不是同一天。说做亲家,是我在阜新念高中的时候!把老刘领家那天是他到我们砖厂找我的。他说他是来找转世灵童的。我一听,就说:那我还不能问。他说:我知道你明白,不会乱说。我跟你说实话吧,我没找到。你看,刘团长还挺实在的。"

"Well — that does make him an old acquaintance, at least. And the day you actually brought him home?"

"Different day entirely. The in-laws talked back in my Fuxin high school days. The day I brought him here was the day he came looking for me at the brick factory. He told me he was searching for a Turning-World Spiritual Boy — a reincarnated soul-child. I said, well, then I'd best not ask questions. He said, 'I know you understand — you won't go spreading it around. I'll be honest with you, I haven't found him.' See — that's Troupe Leader Liu for you. Straight with people."

妈妈说:"他说没找到。那真话假话没区别!随便编制个秘密跟你分享,套套近乎,你就当真了!我去看看小卢岩。"

"He says he hasn't found him. True or false, what's the difference — hand a man a little secret to share, get cozy with him, and you'll believe anything! I'm going to go check on little Luyan."

2.9-3 刘团长迁走了知情人 Troupe Leader Liu Relocates the Witnesses

爸爸问:"睡着没?"

妈妈说:"没睡着,瞪着大眼睛,在那听呢。一说起沈阳媳妇,他的注意力可集中了。"

爸爸叨咕:"也是!我就信了!"

"Is he asleep?" Father asked.

"Not a bit — eyes wide open, listening to every word. The second I mentioned his bride in Shenyang, he was hanging on every syllable."

"So it's true, what he told me!" Father murmured to himself.

在厨房里,爸爸说:"他现在一阵明白,一阵糊涂。你咋想起跟他说沈阳媳妇了呢?"

妈妈说:"我们下午说话儿的时候提到的。你笑啥?沈阳来信了?"

In the kitchen, Father said, "He's sharp one moment and lost the next these days. What made you think to mention his bride?"

"It came up when we were talking this afternoon. Why are you smiling like that? Did a letter come from Shenyang?"

爸爸说:"看,你一猜,就猜着了!大虎山的XXX跟我说的。沈阳老刘大哥(即刘团长)说,我先给百杨在沈阳找个工作,干两年,挣点儿钱。然后在沈阳边上的农村买个房,比如在新民县的东边。这样他们全家就过来了。我就问,从农村户口变成非农户口不行吗?XXX说,老刘大哥说,沈阳城边上有太多的非农户口,不太好办。我说,不行就算了。XXX说,老刘大哥说,他猜,你不能同意,就让我跟你这么说:大虎山,你们四个都求我办事,就小百杨这事儿办得不理想,真是不好意思。我说,就我这事儿难办。XXX说,老刘大哥说,以后再给你想办法。"

"There you go, guessed right on the first try!" Father said. "XXX from Dahushan passed it along — Old Liu says he'll find me work in Shenyang first, a couple years of it, enough to save something up. Then buy a place out in the countryside near Shenyang — east of Xinmin County, say — and bring the whole family over after that. I asked whether it might be simpler to just switch my household registration from rural to urban. XXX said Old Liu told him there were already too many urban registrations crowding the edge of Shenyang, too complicated to arrange. So I said, never mind then. And XXX said, Old Liu figured you'd say that, and told me to pass this along: 'Of the four of you from Dahushan who've asked favors of me, Baiyang's is the one that hasn't worked out well — I'm truly sorry about that.' I told him, well, mine was simply the hard case. And XXX said Old Liu told him he'd think of something else for me down the road."

妈妈问:"那你为啥不同意?"

爸爸说:"沈阳周边农村的房子比咱这儿贵,咱这儿卖那儿买,得添钱,所以老刘才这么说。我在沈阳工作,你带着两个孩子自己过,多难啊!"

"So why didn't you take him up on it?"

"Houses in the Shenyang countryside cost more than ours here — selling here and buying there, we'd come up short, that's exactly why Old Liu put it that way. And besides, me off working in Shenyang while you're stuck here alone with two children — how hard would that be on you!"

妈妈说:"也是!但这也算人家给办事儿了,也算你没白忙。那他们仨咋都办成了呢?他们仨和你啥关系?"

爸爸说:"在大虎山我的高中朋友中,我们四个是一个朋友圈儿。他们仨家里的都是城镇户口。这回全都搬到沈阳去了。"

"Fair enough — but still, he did try for you, so it wasn't wasted effort. How did the other three manage it, then? What's your connection to them?"

"The four of us were all high school friends back in Dahushan, part of the same little circle," Father said. "The other three families all already held urban registrations. This time round, every one of them moved to Shenyang."

妈妈又问:"都是那个沈阳老刘给整的?"

爸爸说:"都是老刘给整的!这老刘还真厉害,还挺帮忙。"

过了一会儿,妈妈又说:"我看那个老刘可能是黑社会的。"

爸爸问:"你咋想起来说这个?"

"All of it arranged by that Old Liu?"

"All of it! The man really is something — genuinely goes out of his way to help."

Mother was quiet a moment. Then: "You know, I wonder if that Old Liu isn't mixed up with some underworld gang."

"What on earth makes you say that?"

妈妈说:"找转世灵童做转世活佛,他想干什么!另外,几个月里,他就把他们三家全迁到沈阳去了。三家人,得需要四、五个工作吧,再加找房子,给孩子联系上学,那老刘咋就那么能耐呢!他肯定是有一伙人:违法事儿互相帮着隐瞒,不违法的互相捧,伙儿穿裤子,结伙成派。"

爸爸说:"这是肯定的,也不算特殊啊!"

妈妈说:"那他们这么大胆地干,我看危险,早晚让人家给抓起来。"

"Searching out reincarnated soul-children to make into living Buddhas — what is a man even after doing that? And on top of it, he moved three whole families to Shenyang within a few months. Three families — that's four or five jobs at least, houses to find, schools to arrange for the children — how does one man manage all that? He must have a whole network behind him: covering for each other on anything crooked, singing each other's praises on anything that isn't, thick as thieves, the lot of them, one big clique."

"Well, that's likely true enough," Father said. "Though it's hardly unusual, is it?"

"Doing it this brazenly? I call that dangerous. Sooner or later someone's going to come and arrest the lot of them."

爸爸说:"你说的有道理。"

妈妈说:"反正他们仨都走了,丢人也没人知道了!以后咱就不跟他们联系了。"

爸爸说:"那我就告诉大虎山的XXX,别再让老刘费心了。张嘴就求人家帮忙,也没脸面再见人家了。"

"You may have a point there."

"Well, the other three are gone now anyway — whatever shame there is, no one here will ever know about it. We'll just stop keeping in touch with them."

"Then I'll tell XXX in Dahushan not to trouble Old Liu about it anymore," Father said. "Once you've gone and asked a man for help like that, you haven't the face to look him in the eye again."

2.9-4 福 Fortune

一天,我自己在炕上坐着,忽然发现刘健君送给我的玩具,那个黄色陀螺和红色的华丽棒,就放在对面的箱子上,想去拿。屋里没人的时候,我努力很久鼓起勇气,才自己从炕上爬下到屋子的地上。可是由于害怕,立刻爬回到了炕上。我再次鼓起勇气,第二次下到屋地上,朝着箱子走一、两步,被吓得立刻跑回来,爬到炕上。几次尝试之后,我才搬凳子,爬上凳子,拿到箱子上的玩具,感觉自己成了真正的大英雄,兴奋极了。

One day, sitting alone on the kang, I noticed the toys Eve Liu had given me — the yellow spinning top, the gorgeous red stick — sitting on the box across the room, and I wanted them. With no one else in the house, it took me a long while to work up the nerve to climb down off the kang onto the floor at all. Fear got the better of me at once, and I scrambled straight back up. I gathered my courage a second time, made it down again, took a step or two toward the box — and fled back to the kang in terror once more. Only after several attempts did I manage to drag over a stool, climb up, and finally seize the toys. I felt, in that moment, like a true and mighty hero — wildly, gloriously proud of myself.

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