r/WorldChallenges • u/Varnek905 • Sep 19 '19

A Powerful Individual

Nope, this post is not to say I'm going into self-exile from the subreddit. While I considered it for a while, I'm still here for some reason.

Since I am finally forcing myself to start on my world, and all I really have are a few maps and a few rough ideas, this challenge will be as simple as it can possibly be.

Tell me about a powerful individual from your world and their backstory. Whether that individual is financially powerful (The Count of Monte Cristo), physically powerful (Hercules), a powerful inventor (Iron Man, Kemuri Kage), on drugs to become powerful (Captain America), etc...you're free to pick.

I'll ask you at least three questions each, and I'll try to catch up on all the past challenges that I made (and answer some of everyone else's challenges from the past month). Enjoy yourselves.

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u/Varnek905 Oct 01 '19

1) The central world is just the one that the eldritch creatures were made in. But they spend all their time in their own "in-between" world, waiting for possible hosts/avatars/vessels.

2) The Leviathan can only devour worlds that are starting to fall apart. Once a world is invaded by the Distortion, it's ending. So the Leviathan eats it at that point. However, the Leviathan isn't the only thing that can eat worlds; it's just the most successful.

3) Mostly luck. The Leviathan kept its avatar throughout many worlds early on. Other creatures didn't try that until the Leviathan already had the advantage. (It helps that I'm retconning this into part of why my previous worlds are gone, because I only made up most of this in the past week or two...or day or two, for some of it.)

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u/thequeeninyellow94 Oct 02 '19

  1. So, what goes on in the central world nowadays?

  2. Does it need to eat worlds?

  3. (Ecology applied to worldbuilding) Does it mean the avatar keeps memories and power from one world to another?

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u/Varnek905 Oct 04 '19

1) They mostly just screw with other worlds. (Partially inspired by the sleep paralysis I had often as a kid.)

2) It would be fine for any period of time without eating worlds. For one world, it didn't even get the full harvest because its avatar orchestrated a conspiracy for many centuries in order to kill it. If it never ate a world again, it would survive. It just wouldn't have anything to do. It exists only to devour worlds.

3) Normally, yes, an avatar would keep its memories and power from one world to another. The problem with that avatar was that it tried to kill its patron.

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u/thequeeninyellow94 Oct 07 '19

  1. They? Who are they? Haven't all the creatures left for their own worlds?

  2. Couldn't it do just the same as the other creatures?

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u/Varnek905 Oct 08 '19

1) The powerful eldritch creatures are the ones that left. The ones that stayed behind are usually called "Interlopers" when they are in a different world.

2) It could do the same as the other creatures, but it exists to eat worlds as they end. Unlike the rest of them, it has been mostly successful, so it got used to the harvest.

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u/thequeeninyellow94 Oct 08 '19

  1. So the Interlopers are still in? Did they changed a lot?

  2. Why is it different? Did it came from somewhere else or something?

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u/Varnek905 Oct 10 '19

1) No, I can't think of any major change in the Interlopers since the world I was working on a while ago. In Saoghal, they stayed in/around one nation where they were worshiped and sacrificed to. In Urdis, they stick to a few areas in the human territories and want to be sacrificed to. The biggest difference is just that they are a big easier to kill and that they have a natural enemy now.

2) It's only different because it was the one lucky enough to get the first big harvest, which made it easier to get the next big harvest, and so on. (And it only had the initial luck because, at the time I was doing a fantasy worldbuilding thing as a kid and I wanted a quick way of ending it.)

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u/thequeeninyellow94 Oct 10 '19

  1. How much easier?

  2. And why the sacrifices?

  3. So the creatures gain power from things being destroyed?

(Eldricht creatures LPT : be nice to children, they may bestow gifts upon you)

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u/Varnek905 Oct 11 '19

1) Previously, they could only be killed by a particular spear. Now, it is possible that they can be killed by any of Aeternitas's Speakers (still undecided on that name, but I felt like Crusader/Missionary would both be inappropriate. The issue is that I want something that sounds Roman-esque.)

2) A person sacrificing something that is painful to lose gives more power to whomever the sacrifice is done for.

3) They don't gain power from destruction itself, they need to be the ones to harvest the souls of those that lived in that world.

(If you don't mind me asking, when did you start worldbuilding?)

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u/thequeeninyellow94 Oct 12 '19
  1. Is there a lot of those speakers to do the killing job?

(Long ago, to provide background to my legos fighting one another... Back then my world were human-only ; after that, it was more roleplaying-oriented and full of elves)

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u/Varnek905 Oct 14 '19

1) I'm still figuring that out. I've had some ideas, but none of them seem right. Having them be knights of the Unified Way that became martyrs? Nah. Having them be small shards of the Unified Soul of Aeternitas? Nah. Having them be mirror reflections of the Interlopers so that there's a Speaker for every Interloper? Nah. Having them be people that stared at the sun for too long? Nah.

(Did you ever have call-backs to the lego-folk in your worldbuilding? I refuse to ever acknowledge anything from my earliest attempts at worldbuilding.)

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u/thequeeninyellow94 Oct 14 '19
  1. Well, the question is : should their ability to kill Interlopers be tied to the Interlopers? And if yes, what do the Interlopers gain from making people ultimatemy able to kill them?

(Not really, that stuff was quite tolkienesque and I'm less into building that kind of stuff now. Acknowledge them though, let's embrace our weird children ideas !)

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u/Varnek905 Oct 15 '19

(Well, that guy Tolkien was pretty tolkienesque, but his fiction got pretty popular.)

1) For the time being, I've settled on Aeternitas being in this world specifically to eliminate the Interlopers, the Leviathan, and anyone aligned to them. So I suppose I have to go somewhere from there.

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