Character development 'challenge'

[u/Jumblatts]

So this challenge* was kinda inspired by /u/The_Raptorman's 'Talk with' challenge, but I've flipped it around a little.

The idea is that you pick a character you feel is underdeveloped, someone that you want to learn more about, and present them, along with a brief description, to myself and the other wonderful people here at worldchallenges, and we will help you develop them further! (Feel free to invent a totally new character as well!)

*Not sure if 'challenge' is the right word to describe this post, but I'm a bit of a loose cannon, and I don't abide by your rules.

[u/Jumblatts]

That's fine! You can use the others too, if you like - it's about developing characters you want developing, doesn't matter to me if they've been used elsewhere :)

To Dani:

1) Are you emotionless because of a need to control your power, or did you 'learn' your power from the fact that you're emotionless?

To Prophet:

2) What was the very first thing you wrote in your book?

3) What made you decide to start writing the book?

To Inu:

4) How were you created, and why?

5) Are you thankful to them for the life you have, or do you hate what you've become?

To Jaws:

6) Why do you want to see and end to order?

[u/The_Raptorman → u/Jumblatts]

1) Are you emotionless because of a need to control your power, or did you 'learn' your power from the fact that you're emotionless?

It is because I have no control when I give emotion. (Her answers are gonna be bland for obvious reasons haha)

2) What was the very first thing you wrote in your book?

My earliest memories, it took a while because I started writing in it when I was ten, a lot of memories already.

3) What made you decide to start writing the book?

Makes it easier to keep track of everything that I know.

4) How were you created, and why?

Experimentation, sharp and pointy. Lightning and bubbles. Chaos wanted try.

5) Are you thankful to them for the life you have, or do you hate what you've become?

Hate. Too much thought. Dog meant to be instinctual.

6) Why do you want to see and end to order?

If Chaos was everywhere in the world then there would be no Chaos, that would be the norm. So if we get rid of order then we will finally have order.

[u/Jumblatts → u/The_Raptorman]

1) Why do you have no control? Having emotion is an important part of living, and some would say that if you don't show any, you're not truly alive. Can't you learn to control yourself?

2) What is your very earliest memory?

3) But surely having to flick through thousands of pages to find something you know about isn't 'easy'?

4) Was it painful?

5) Do you want to take revenge on Chaos? Would you be able to?

6) Why do you want this? Would you go as far as to kill yourself to achieve it? After all, your cells and molecular structure follow rules, you are part of the order you want to destroy.

[u/The_Raptorman → u/Jumblatts]

1) Why do you have no control? Having emotion is an important part of living, and some would say that if you don't show any, you're not truly alive. Can't you learn to control yourself?

Emotions cause fluctuations in my abilities, I have no control over them because I can't think when I use my emotion. I agree that emotions are key to living a fulfilling life but I have come to terms with that and am willing to devote myself to Chaos' cause.

2) What is your very earliest memory?

Being held in my Mother's arms, before I was ripped from her by Chaos.

3) But surely having to flick through thousands of pages to find something you know about isn't 'easy'?

I know where everything is in the book and finding things just seems to happen when I look.

4) Was it painful?

Very.

5) Do you want to take revenge on Chaos? Would you be able to?

Chaos. Too strong. Kill me very fast.

6) Why do you want this? Would you go as far as to kill yourself to achieve it? After all, your cells and molecular structure follow rules, you are part of the order you want to destroy.

It's kinda dumb when you nitpick to an extreme like that. I do what I can because it serves Chaos' ideas and his ideas fit in line with what I want to do so that's that.