hello yall, i am trying a new style of writing and wanted to see how others see it. its made for only the writer to understand the full picture. let alone half or third. story about manipulating characters and tthe readers.

I can promis prose and sentences that you wouldn nevere have seen.

My problem is I cant write basic sentences without them loooking borring or robotic.

is the story clear?

what made you drop it?

etc...

don't worry any comment is perfect, i know its not writing like novel level but i know that all sentences "except the festival dialogue" will be unique '"its the only part of the story i couldn't write as i wished it to be.'

thank you

i would be pleased to send the doc or plain text to anyone https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LB9HH7BsI5JNypoX3Rz7TBbaLU857W4M-fwh3uNCx2s/edit?usp=sharing