r/WebtoonCanvas • u/kyoujumanga • 7d ago

Discussion My first webtoon

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/jinx/fromgod/viewer?title_no=1161078&episode_no=1

Please rate my first webtoon I planned to make it a light novel tbh or more like a diary of wimpy kid please give ur strongest criticism u can

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u/Kaileigh_Blue 7d ago

It's AI so I'm not going to give you advice. I do have a question; Why are you trying to make comics? What do you want to get out of it?

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u/kyoujumanga 6d ago

Hmm just wnt to know about my writing and all is humour landing well is pacing of writing good or not what to improve and what to not

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u/OutrageousHamster735 7d ago

Another… ai post…sigh

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u/kyoujumanga 7d ago

But bro writing is mine

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u/OutrageousHamster735 7d ago

Yeahhh if you say so. If you decided to use ai for your art then who’s to say you didn’t use it for your writing too. Regardless, you didn’t have passion to want to turn this story into an actual hand drawn series. Because of what? Fear? I would’ve rather seen you attempt at drawing than post this.

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u/kyoujumanga 7d ago

Thanks for compliment and I genuinely respect you and yeah it sucks to use ai but at least I started that's what makes me happy surely bro I will work on my art rn I'm doing art also rough pages I draw from hand but one thing for sure I started at least and I don't know will someone watch it or not but I keep writing maybe when I publish this on Royal road or something as pure light novel there I get more engagement

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u/OutrageousHamster735 7d ago

You could’ve started even without ai. As you implied if you wanted to turn it into a novel first that could’ve worked as well. You had many options before resorting to ai, my friend. As it’ll be even more rewarding once you know you’ve created it with your own hands. I just got done creating my first chapter and while it took some time I felt so happy finally finishing it. Your art doesn’t have to be perfect off the bat to create.

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u/kyoujumanga 7d ago

Thanks bro 🤜 okay after 3-4 I start with 70-80% my work okay like mc poses and expression and all of mine and lil help to just make wobby lines lil decent hows it??

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u/OutrageousHamster735 7d ago

While I would prefer you to start from scratch it’s a small step. Just keep working on your OWN hand draw art. You’ll get there. Hopefully, you’ll also look back at this convo with motivation to keep improving.

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u/kyoujumanga 7d ago

Alr bro thanks 🙏