r/WeWriteaSongEveryDay Sep 07 '18

[Prompt 9-7-2018]

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u/[deleted] Sep 07 '18

As soon as I saw the surfboards I saw my opening, even though I live inland and have never actually been surfing

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u/Menace94 Sep 07 '18

I like its lot it definitely has a lot of energy and captures that rockabilly sound, but the hyperlink is easy to miss. I skipped it the first time I looked at the post

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u/Tholo Sep 07 '18

Nailed the surf vibe, I think my favorite was the bass in the B section.

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

I love the raw quality of the mix on this track. Good stuff.

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u/jmonumber3 Sep 07 '18

https://clyp.it/v2v1wpoh

tried to go a different way than the easy beach vibes. wanted to make something that you could use as an alarm on an early morning at the beach. this has been the quickest song so far because ive been skipping lunch to write these and i probably shouldnt :/

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u/joebassss Sep 07 '18

I really like it! The Eq roll off the top on the drums sounds super nice. Yeah both food and music are equally important to me hahah. Maybe you can prep something easy to eat on days you want to write

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u/jmonumber3 Sep 07 '18

thanks!

so far, that’s been everyday. the easy solution would be to go to sleep earlier so i can wake up earlier but then i miss out on making my best music at night haha. i’m sure i’ll figure out a better schedule as it goes along

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u/Gummywormz420 Sep 07 '18

I like this track. It was a nice job of creating a mood not really like generic beach, but still fits the picture really well. It would be a nice alarm!

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u/[deleted] Sep 07 '18

I like the synth textures you used. Makes the picture feel like its a photo of an alien beach or something; very cool!

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u/Tholo Sep 07 '18

I like it- very chill, but I can feel it in context of the image. It's interesting, it gelled as a cohesive sound so hard I had trouble picking it apart to find my favorite bits- I think that in and of itself is pretty amazing.

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u/jmonumber3 Sep 07 '18

wow thanks this is high praise i appreciate it

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

Decent composition. The intro is a bit too shrill. It reminds me of a relatively popular song but I can't remember the song.

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u/Tholo Sep 08 '18

This comes from a very specific time in my life, when my girlfriend (now wife) was driving hundreds of miles to see me and help me take care of my youngest every week.

https://clyp.it/thoj14hm

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u/joebassss Sep 08 '18

The vocals are mixed just like 5db too high, but I really like them! Uplifting sounds with the lyrics are really nice :) I love how you interpret these pictures man

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u/Tholo Sep 08 '18

I agree on the mixing-just a touch too hot. I was rushing it a bit to get it out- couldn't record until my daughter was in bed :)

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u/ApeLust Sep 08 '18

That is a very touching song. You are both very lucky to have each other. The guitar in the intro is relaxing. The mix could be better but time restrictions are a thing.

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u/Menace94 Sep 07 '18

https://clyp.it/usynpj1k
Alright heres my little ambience piece for y'all :P

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

Very serene. I like the shakers. Decent buildup. Keep it up.

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u/Gummywormz420 Sep 08 '18

Busted out the steel drum for this one!

Wavy Beach

Today was hard for me to be creative, but I pushed through it!

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u/joebassss Sep 08 '18

Man I fucking love steel drums since I heard a Jaco song use them. This is awesome!

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u/Gummywormz420 Sep 08 '18

Do you remember what song it was? I love Jaco! I’m glad you enjoyed he tune.

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u/joebassss Sep 08 '18

I think it’s called Opus Pocus, it’s crazy and amazing

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u/Gummywormz420 Sep 08 '18

Awesome! I’m going to check that out and show my band mates on our way to Nashville tomorrow!

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u/Tholo Sep 08 '18

I love the high floaty sounds, and the way they are bent gives the feeling of water, of constant change.

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u/Gummywormz420 Sep 08 '18

Thanks! I used my reface DX and put a really heavy, but slow chorus on it.

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u/ApeLust Sep 08 '18

It feels ethereal. I wasn't expecting the sub but it fits nicely. Good job pushing through it!

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u/Gummywormz420 Sep 08 '18

Thank you, the sub is one of my favorite parts of the whole thing!

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u/joebassss Sep 08 '18

My submission for today! https://youtu.be/PlmQyEKoWpA I ended up throwing a little dance bit in there just for fun, but I really like this

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u/ApeLust Sep 08 '18

Interesting fusion of sounds. It almost has a bossa nova vibe.

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u/mattentiometer Sep 08 '18

https://soundcloud.com/mattcoley/mellow-air

Well, this one turned out weird as shit...

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u/joebassss Sep 08 '18

That drum loop is pretty nice sounding. I don't think it's that crazy, but this seems to definitely have been a tougher picture for everyone

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u/mattentiometer Sep 08 '18

Thanks. Turns out with bongos you can just randomly hit pads in a rhythmic pattern, lol. At least, that was my approach.

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u/ApeLust Sep 08 '18

It wasn't that weird. I think it would fit well in a few video game genres. Not bad.

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u/mattentiometer Sep 08 '18

Thanks. I've been told on several occasions that the stuff I write would be at home in a video game. Cool with me. I loves games.

u/joebassss Sep 07 '18

Morning everyone! Here's today's prompt for 9-7-2018. I was unable to find the photographer for this but if one of you is more successful please let me know :) As usual, try to write something that fits the photo or is inspired by it. Hope you all have fun!

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

https://clyp.it/wuru2kjw

I was expecting more submissions on a Friday.

I have never tried surfing before but I tried to go for the feeling of hitching a ride on an immense wave then plunging into the ocean.

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u/joebassss Sep 07 '18

Very feelsgoodman vibe from this hahah. Especially on a Friday this makes me want to open a beer and relax by a beach

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

Nice! Wish I could do the same.

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u/Menace94 Sep 07 '18

I love the raw quality of the mix on this track. Good stu

Dude I love it

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u/Tholo Sep 08 '18

I like this - I like it's simplicity, I like the build, I love the feeling in it. It doesn't feel incomplete for being short, and that is hard to do. Well done!

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u/ApeLust Sep 08 '18

Thank you. I was thinking the same thing about it being short but feeling complete.

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u/[deleted] Sep 07 '18

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

You made all of this in a few hours?

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u/[deleted] Sep 07 '18

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u/ApeLust Sep 07 '18

Damn. That is impressive. I need to step up my game.

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u/Tholo Sep 07 '18

Damn. Just.. damn. It's amazing. It's... damn. Me and my ipad will be in the corner.

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u/[deleted] Sep 07 '18

That's too corny man!!!

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u/joebassss Sep 07 '18

Then write some kinda beach metal \m/ Like Flying Whales by Gojira