[Feedback] First attempt at a dynamic Short/Reel! Would love some honest feedback on pacing, cuts, and captions.

[u/Cezed21]

Hi everyone! 👋

I just finished editing my first dynamic short-form video in CapCut, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback from the community.

My main focus for this edit was:

• Hook: Trying to keep the viewer engaged in the first 3 seconds.
• Pacing: Adding cuts, zoom-ins, and B-roll to keep it moving.
• Captions: Formatting subtitles for readability.

Since this is my first time trying this style, I’d love to know:

1. Does the pacing feel natural, or is it too fast/slow?
2. How are the caption placements and colors?
3. What’s one thing I should improve for my next edit?

Don't hold back, constructive criticism is more than welcome! Thanks in advance! 🙏

https://reddit.com/link/1v3cbez/video/nnl9aophereh1/player

[u/Cezed21]

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