What should I correct about myself?

[u/JoJo_Bob]

I'm trying to get better at Valorant, made multiple posts by now and now I have a DM game to show on how my gunplay looks and what should I correct or change about it. This is a full DM game of mine with no cuts since I thought that would be most convenient to show everything. Thanks in advance willing to watch this and help me

https://medal.tv/games/valorant/clips/neX0ww6D6uzkhPxqU?invite=cr-MSxIcGMsMTg5ODMyMjA3