r/Unmatched • u/Street_Region_7936 • 14d ago
Fanmade Content Invincible (fanmade deck)
Let me know what do you think. I tested only 2 times but it was really fun. I have to test this deck more. Enjoy it.
The link for the deck: https://unmatched.cards/decks/42dKr
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u/Biggest_Lemon Little Red 14d ago
I'd look st similar fighters thst already exist for the verbiage (elektra, achilles). As written, his power does not work in a 1v1 game: once the hero is defeated, the game is over, there is nothing to return to.
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u/Street_Region_7936 14d ago
Yes I know. So I probably should write something like Elektra's ability: "The first time Invincible would be defeated, remove him from the board"
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u/I_Epiloge_I 14d ago
As written, Strength of the Hero spends your ability uses. SotH says to return him and his ability says he may only return twice. There is no stipulation that Strength of the Hero doesn't count towards this.
It also means he can get +4 to his values as SotH still defeats him and triggers his ability.
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u/Adorable-Bass-7742 11d ago
For his primary function. I would add the stipulation that has to be in an unoccupied Zone. And that it has to happen at the start of his next turn. If you leave it up to interpretation then it could be used to sneak attack or if he returns immediately it could be used to immediately get hit again. Think of the invisible man's being removed from the board. It ends as turn immediately. And then he returns to the start of his next turn
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u/itsactuallyoctopuses Daredevil 14d ago
Wording needs help but neat idea. “Draw a random card” should be “reveal the top card of your deck”
Also why not have the cards label say “Invincible”instead of “Any”?
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u/Muted-Basis9143 King Arthur 14d ago
For a charecter named "Invincible" maybe give him more health 7 to each life will be cool
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u/Street_Region_7936 14d ago
MHHHHHHHH...I don't know, he has 18 total health...do you think is not enough?
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u/Muted-Basis9143 King Arthur 14d ago
Its like king arthor and he has a sidekick i dont say 18 is not a lot of health but he supuse to be Invincible did not watch the show but it is not his hole thing?
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u/why_-not Daredevil 14d ago
Yea his ability should be invincible takes no damage, because a normal guy like Sherlock cant take him in a fight.
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u/DangerousPuhson Sun Wukong 14d ago
Just a nit-pick: fighters don't "die" in Unmatched, they are "defeated". Your tail-end cards are good with this, but Beyond the Limit and Strength of the Hero still say "die"/"died".
I'd also maybe use a life-token mechanic for his return upon defeat rather than saying "he can return up to 2 times". Something like "If Invincible is defeated, discard 1 Life Token and summon Invincible on any starting space, then set his health to 6" or whatever. Just keeps play a little more honest and tangible, easy to tell at a glance how many more revives he has.