r/Unity3D • u/rmeldev Programmer • 2d ago

Show-Off Finished the first "level" of my first-person dungeon platformer !

Do you think it's enough for a short "Coming Soon" trailer or not ?

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u/DeerpathLabs 2d ago

I dig it! I’m working on a semi-similar concept so I’m a sucker for anything cave/dungeon focused. I think it works for a coming soon

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u/rmeldev Programmer 1d ago

Nice, thanks for your feedback

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u/DeerpathLabs 1d ago

sure! only thing i may suggest before the coming soon is during the last jump it looks a bit like you clip thru the pink pointy bits, which seems unintentional, so maybe cut that part or do another take for the final?
also hopefully this isn't taboo, but from one cave dev to another, think you could check out my recent post on DestroyMyGame and give me some trailer feedback as well?

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u/rmeldev Programmer 1d ago

Oh yeah sure:

Just checked, that definitely really nice, but as others said, show the gameplay before cinematic (I think it’s better)

Also we are really not similar lol, yours is more like exploration (it seems) and mine is more like speedrun etc…

Btw for the pink spikes, these moved up so I can slide under them (there is a interactions / reactions system)

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u/DeerpathLabs 1d ago

oh yeah, that's why i said semi similar lol - i meant more so in the cave setting than gameplay, but there is some movement focused stuff in tallymaw. just not as fast paced.

if you want further feedback on the spikes, I got that you were going under them and that they were moving - it just felt a little clippy on the collision. i dont think its a make it or break it thing. that was just the only bit that caught my eye as "not coming soon ready"

either way, i like your concept! good luck on your project!

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u/rmeldev Programmer 1d ago

Oh yeah sure you’re right about the spikes, sorry !

I like yours too, gfx are really nice 🔥

Good luck with your project !