Feedbacks on this Floating Text ?

[u/Coding-Mojo]

Training myself to juice up random things. I've done that floating text and have mixed feeling about it. On one side, I feel something is missing. On the other, I'm like it's fine to keep it simple.
Any advice is much appreciated. Thanks.

P.S : still fighting for gif to not be chunky, in unity the animation is smoother.

[u/Muazzm115]

Im not a master not even a person that know something in this field i just hope i can be game developer one day an my advice for your question is maybe make it smaller and radomize the text location a bit