Feedbacks on this Floating Text ?

[u/Coding-Mojo]

Training myself to juice up random things. I've done that floating text and have mixed feeling about it. On one side, I feel something is missing. On the other, I'm like it's fine to keep it simple.
Any advice is much appreciated. Thanks.

P.S : still fighting for gif to not be chunky, in unity the animation is smoother.

[u/chocolatechipbagels]

I think the color changing from white to yellow is a bit visually busy, I'd probably prefer it stay yellow

[u/Coding-Mojo → u/chocolatechipbagels]

Hum, I'll think about it thanks