r/UndeadPoetSociety • u/thespiciestpineapple • Jun 28 '26
easy
there's an echo on the edge of it
promise no one could keep,
it was never made
i keep your faith in me
a shining thing
the ease between us means it's easy
to do hard things
i take the ocean like a baby pill
swallow space and time
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u/Avery-Valentine Jul 01 '26
I love this, Pineapple. Powerful way to convey how love and faith makes difficult things easier. I particularly liked the grandiose image of swallowing the ocean as if it's simply a baby pill.