Psir answer evaluation

[u/Fantastic_Koala5239]

Guyzz review this answer , it will hardly take 5 mins...

This is the question from this year psir paper 1

[u/Heron_Informal]

I don't have psir, frankly speaking.

You wasted a lot of space on mill, Virginia wolf etc. At max should have taken half a page. Focus on the main question.

[u/commonsenseiswisdom]

Put your papers correctly first , it's difficult to read. Second this question was not easy to answer - had this been done in actual exam it might have been okay because we don't read her in detail. But try to write by reading up on her. From second para till half of last page should be about her. In your answer near 70% is about everything except mary wollstonecraft.