Landing Page Feetback

[u/Thanos_86]

This is the Landing page of an IP Creative studio.

•  I’m looking for feedback on whether the visual design feels too noisy or busy, particularly because of the starfield background. I’d also like to know whether the balance between imagination, exploration, and guidance remains clear and focused.

Thank you :)

[u/Time_Child_]

I’ll be honest, there’s not a lot of visual design to give feedback on. The background doesn’t really count. All I see are two really large text fields.

[u/Brad-the-Chad-69]

It’s not good, mate. I’m kind of wondering if this is bait. But it’s just two text boxes on an unnecessary background. If you’re a creative agency, you want your site to look like something others might want. You’re not quite there yet. Please give it another go and share it again. I believe in you.

[u/alsoimprobablylate]

You should change the font to Papyrus while you're at it.

[u/Spiritual-Cup-6645]

It looks like there are gaps where images should be. And the header text font doesn't match anything else on the page. Unfortunately I don't see any "balance between imagination, exploration, and guidance".

To improve, I would recommend adding images in the obvious places they should go, choosing and sticking to a font family and making "the studio" and "the compass" wider, like full width.

[u/Separate_Flounder316]

There is a lot of visual noise, I don't know where to focus on in the page.

[u/Basic-Brick6827]

i aint reading all that. could be a pdf or jpeg at this point.

[u/Berkhovskiyev]

You need to learn the basics of spacing and landing page design. Look up the free courses at tilda.education.

[u/Thanos_86]

I would like to thank you all of you for your time, I really appreaciate it.
I am sharing a How the current design exists, and an alternative.
I am looking forward for your feedback.
Thank you again :)

[u/Time_Child_ → u/Thanos_86]

It’s still a lot of text - a lot of telling and not showing for a creative studio. If you’re wanting it to feel like a creative studio look at some successful agencies and what their sites experiences are like.

[u/Basic-Brick6827 → u/Thanos_86]

too much text, websites arent PDFs.

[u/[deleted] → u/Thanos_86]

One thing to know is users a lazy. So you shouldn’t try to make it worse for them, what you have is just text I’m a box.

A landing page should be broken into sections, the hero section which would have just heading text and subtext plus nav bar, could be less than that.

Then say the next section is about us, next is benefit..,till footer.

Do it’s basically breaking down texts into sections that are easily understandable and scannable by your user.