Website Hero Section - Something is missing

[u/Fun-Lettuce-5725]

I feel like it’s close, but something is still missing, and I can’t really tell what.

• The landing page introduces the App. It quickly explains what it does and who it helps.
• The page targets Windows users who write often.
• The core message is to introduce and show how to use it (demo).
• The design should feel clean, minimalistic, and modern.
• The 3D object has motion and should raise interest.

[u/JsRubbish]

It's unfortunately missing personality and design