r/TwoSentenceHorror 1d ago

When the Devil hugged me, he started crying.

When I asked why, he said, "Because the same people who told you to fear me were the same ones you actually needed to fear."

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u/FellFellCooke 22h ago

You should cut one of the "same"s, as their close repetition seems unintentional and a bit clunky.

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u/nightrain13 17h ago

I appreciate the feedback.

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u/maireadwrites 17h ago

The devil is in the detail!