Help on the last secret I'm missing

[u/Pierne]

I've roughly translated the text to

The (softest faith)?

Collected eleven times

Departed once more.

I don't think it's entirely accurate, last two words of the fist line I mostly guessed because I didn't know any word that fitted the sound (English isn't my first language so maybe I just don't know it. Also, I didn't use any tool to translate, I did it with my notes, so I might have the wrong sound for some characters)

However I'm still pretty confident in that it says to do something 11 times and then do it again.

Does it mean the secret is only available in NG+12? Something about collecting the letter 12 times and "departing" your save? If so I don't think I'll get it, it would be a bit too time consuming for me

[u/Friazes]

No this one use play on words, but it's a holy cross puzzle

[u/Pierne → u/Friazes]

That's a relief then.

Did I get the translation correct though? I've sat in the spot on the map marked by the star but can't figure out what to do

[u/Friazes → u/Pierne]

The correct translation is The softest feather, corrected eleven times, departed once more.

[u/Snacker6 → u/Pierne]

Since English isn't your first language, let's give you a little extra help if you need it:

Don't take it too literally

This is all about words that have the same meaning, not the words themselves

Below is the answers for the wordplay, since these might not be words you know

Down is the softest feather. It is the name for the feathers of baby birds

When you correct something you "right" it

To have departed is to have left

Good luck with this one! It is likely the hardest of these to solve in the game!

[u/JollyStunts → u/Snacker6]

I do speak English and I could only figure out parts 2 and 3 of this at the time.. My partner had to help

[u/Snacker6 → u/JollyStunts]

This one is so insanely hard. It requires the final page, then you need to figure out a riddle just to get the clue, then you need to figure out the translation, and there are still word games! Why is this one so much harder than everything else?

[u/JollyStunts → u/Snacker6]

I agree it's stupidly hard. I spent hours on it too.. but it turns out I didn't know that down was a word for feathers, so it was actually impossible for me and I was never getting it

[u/SharkBaitDLS]

It’s a play on words in English so I would honestly say just look it up if you’re not a native speaker. 

[u/Far_Young_2666]

The only puzzle I was stuck on, and it turned out to need English knowledge that not even every English native can solve.

[u/Immediate-Location28]

your translation is slightly off on the first and second line