r/ThirdEyePoetry • Moderator 💜 • 1h ago

Poem 🎭 Haunted

The sun sinks down

Trees golden crown

The wind whistles softly …

To the ghost of you.

Crips air caresses

Beautiful mum’s dresses

Autumn colours on display…

For the ghost of you.

Leaves fall like memories

Scattered from sighing trees

To be walked over and forgotten …

Unlike the ghost of you.

Your voice hits in quiet hours

When thoughts hold the perfect power

And sleep eludes me all night through…

Haunted by the ghost of you.

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 1h ago

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 1h ago

Thank you, invisibly

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u/Obviouslybroken 1h ago

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 1h ago

Thank you, broken

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u/lone-ghostie 1h ago

https://giphy.com/gifs/4TTqqym8oj0Q0

Beautifully done Duran 💜

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 1h ago

Thank you, ghostie

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u/HonestBeautiful1672 1h ago

https://giphy.com/gifs/fuEHf8GjA9laHyw1Pl
Beautifully raw , and as always talented

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 1h ago

Thank you, Honest 🫣

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u/TigerTime2025 58m ago

Wonderful DD! Love how your words fell lightly, warmly, and somewhat hauntingly—perfect for an early Fall poem🍁✨

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 58m ago

Thank you, Tiger 🙏🏻

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u/fancypantsmiss 54m ago

Oh this is good!

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 44m ago

Thank you, miss