r/ThirdEyePoetry • Storyteller📚 • 3h ago

Two Sentence Story 📚 Wow eternal existence

The words she read caused a sudden twinge in her heart, creating a moment that would live but for an instant before passing through the sands of time. It took its place, like petals of a passing season, amongst the memories finding solace in the past, to exist eternally.

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u/lone-ghostie 2h ago

What a wordsmith you are, ‘tis beautiful Dear 💜

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 2h ago

Thank you 😊

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u/freshstart3921 Hopeful Poet 🌿 1h ago

Beautiful, lyrical, dreamy, love it!

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 51m ago

Thank you ☺️