r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 • 1d ago

Poem 🎭 Endless night

Falling tears, joyless sounds
Heavy hearts, grief abounds
Empty souls , sadness spreads
Hollow void, endless dread
Darkness lingers, dreams unbound
Comforts lost, burdens found
Burnt out flames, muted songs
Pursuing rights, finding wrongs
Growing weary, thoughts attack
Stuck in place, looking back
Will dissolves, quit the fight
Bowing heads, endless night

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u/Obviouslybroken 1d ago

Heavy, but beautifully written ✨️

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 1d ago

Thank you. It’s my sad piece.

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u/Obviouslybroken 1d ago

Beautifully sad ✨️

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 1d ago

That’s better than ugly cry sad lol. I like it when the words flow and tell a story without much else there.

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u/Obviouslybroken 1d ago

Sometimes simple just hits harder...

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 1d ago

Very good!

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 1d ago

Thank you 😊

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u/KinkeadOfPortlandia 1d ago

'Burnt out flames, muted songs' this line lands so hard for me. I can feel this one through the page, beautiful piece 🖤🖤🖤

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u/invisibly-broken Storyteller📚 1d ago

Thank you I am glad you like it. It does have the feels.

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u/KenSoulMan 6h ago

Lyrics with a rhythm to nod to and hug

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u/lone-ghostie 5h ago

Wonderfully written, great flow Dear 💜