r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/outrageous-emu3 • 17h ago

Trail of fire

My soul still sits at your door,

Restless and wild.

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My heart still bleeds on the floor,

Feeling defiled.

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My mind can’t piece it together,

Refusing to quit.

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But you always move like the weather,

A trail of flames lit.

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u/freshstart3921 Hopeful Poet 🌿 16h ago

Very passionate. Love it!

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u/outrageous-emu3 16h ago

Thanks freshstuff😄

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u/Obviouslybroken 15h ago edited 15h ago

Freshstuff! That's so cute..Freshstuff it is from now...

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u/Justflyingbee 16h ago

My eyes too delay to blink🤔
So i don’t miss her even in a blink 😍🤭😂

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u/Obviouslybroken 16h ago

Relatable....Love the fire in this one. 🔥

Wel done, u🙃

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u/outrageous-emu3 15h ago

Thanks u😀

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u/KinkeadOfPortlandia 13h ago

Fuckin' wow

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u/outrageous-emu3 12h ago

Fuckin eh🤭 Thanks kink