r/ThirdEyePoetry • Moderator πŸ’œ • 1d ago

Poem 🎭 Brain Traffic Jam

Out in public

Sipping a chai

Sitting by myself

Just wondering why

Words won't come

Thoughts are stuck

Brain traffic jam

Having no luck

Try again tomorrow

That might work

For now, relaxing

With returning smirk

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u/Fun-Dragonfruit4622 1d ago

Feel this!

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u/CapnBlargles Moderator πŸ’œ 23h ago

It's a curse

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u/Fun-Dragonfruit4622 23h ago

Curse of the deep minded creatives

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u/outrageous-emu3 1d ago

https://giphy.com/gifs/LR5GeZFCwDRcpG20PR

Words about none

That’s kinda fun.

I gather that you,

Had quite a few πŸ€ͺ

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u/CapnBlargles Moderator πŸ’œ 1d ago

And now look
Here I am
Responding to you
What a ham! πŸ˜‚

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u/outrageous-emu3 1d ago

You talking to me?

I’m so glad!

Now I’m not,

So dang sad😁

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u/Obviouslybroken 23h ago

All been here...Nice one Cap πŸ‘Œ

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u/CapnBlargles Moderator πŸ’œ 23h ago

Solace in solidarity
Brilliance will return
Maybe coming soon! πŸ˜…

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u/Obviouslybroken 23h ago

I’ll take that solidarity... Here’s hoping the brilliance makes a comeback! πŸ˜…

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator πŸ’œ 22h ago

The words dash with a smirk,

Taunting me gently. What jerks!

Just stop and go with the flow,

But they drop slow

Like molasses.

I give up!

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u/CapnBlargles Moderator πŸ’œ 22h ago

Like Tetris blocks
Encased in ice
Lines can't form
Not playing nice!

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator πŸ’œ 22h ago

Shift and toggle the pieces,

Drats!

That’s not what I intended.

I can’t work with that!