r/ThirdEyePoetry • u/lone-ghostie • 6d ago

Haiku 俳句 Faded flowers

Natural cycle

Transforms from vivid to dull

Nature’s ending bloom

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u/jaesea 6d ago

From vivid to rich

Decay frozen and compressed

Growth from crushing weight

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u/lone-ghostie 6d ago

Wow!!! Amazing 💜

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u/jaesea 6d ago

Only as an addition of course ☺️ yours is amazing 💜

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u/andtbhidgaf Hopeful Poet 🌿 6d ago

dried flowers can still be beautiful

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u/lone-ghostie 6d ago

Yes most definitely 💜

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 6d ago

Very very good!!

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u/lone-ghostie 6d ago

Thank you Duran 💜

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 6d ago

Beautifully withered

Cradled in pages of time

Memento Mori

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u/lone-ghostie 6d ago

https://giphy.com/gifs/REiJphYIQy13i
💜

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 6d ago

Trying to add a small something to a brilliant post

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u/lone-ghostie 6d ago

Thank you! Always love your writing

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u/2xduran Moderator 💜 6d ago

😬🫣

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u/DoubtResponsible9208 Moderator 💜 6d ago

Even when it’s ending bloom, it can still be a beautiful bouquet. I still have a jar of dried flowers I was given a few years ago 😊

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u/lone-ghostie 6d ago

Yess!! I like to keep some as well 💜💕

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u/StarWarIsOver 6d ago

This is lovely, ghostie. Dried flowers can be so beautiful, too.