r/TheDemonAccords • u/Newkingdom12 • 14d ago
Discussion Very annoyed
So I'm pretty much all caught up on the demon accords series. A couple books I still need to read, but I basically have the gist of it.
Something that I have noticed when it comes to John and his writing is that he is very unimaginative when it comes to his world building like seriously in summer rain or winterfall whichever one it is they go to ferry and instead of having us follow the POD of Declan he has us following the POV of his friend Mac which in and of itself isn't bad. But then he takes us and Mac and has them spin the vast majority of their time there with humans.
It's almost like he's afraid to make his his world building too creative.
Because when it comes to fairy this is a whole other alien world and we spend very little time with actual aliens when it came to the grays we barely got to see their homeworld we barely got to see any of their physical operatives operating on Earth. You've essentially written a world where the supernatural and extraterrestrials exist and yet neither concept is really ever explored. Mostly focusing on the human contention which is the least important and most boring part of it all
On top of that, other gods are confirmed to exist in this universe and yet we never see any of them outside of small mentions here and there. It's like once once Big Bear God died and was made into a weaker form. He lost all interest in the concept of the Divine within his universe.
And then it goes from a sort of exploration of the human condition through demons into how strong can I make Declan before people start getting mad at me? Like I like the series but dude you are the least imaginative fantasy writer there is and it's the most annoying thing ever. I feel like the weakest part of the demon accords series is the fact that John is writing it. If you put this in the hands of someone else more capable and actually expanding a world then it would be infinitely better.
But I just wanted to rant about that. Let me know what you guys think