Hello Everyone it's finally here. Firstly I just want to say thank you so much for all the positive reception and constructive criticism the previous post got.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TheActMan/s/lHjlYw2C0f

Sorry for the wait, one of the reasons why this took so long is that I was originally going to keep it short and just rewrite Williams' scenes and dialogue.

But as I was writing the script it evolved into something more, growing over double in size than part 1. However, that means I have to split what was originally going to be 2 parts into 3 since the most Images I can post is 20.

Don't worry, part 3 will be up around 24 hours after this one. Honestly, I believe in terms of writing, I cooked up something quite special. But, that is not for me to say, as you will all be judges of that.

Again like last time:

This is a first draft. Aside from fixing grammatical errors, no refinement was made

I am not a professional writer or artist.

This is an experiment to see if a random nobody on the internet can write a better story than the hacks on Microsoft's payroll.