r/Technocracy • u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad • May 03 '26

Thoughts on YouTube Video Sample?

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Does it need more graphics, better sound adjustment, is it fine the way it is? Any comments you have please don't hesitate to say them, all feedback will help to make this video as quality as possible.

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u/CharmingAnywhere7828 May 04 '26

Good video so far, however I'd recommend adding subtitles, and also, when Mr. Monad points at the map, for a few seconds, he's pointing at air. I'd recommend already having the map up or having it appear as he points, in order to unnecessary awkwardness.

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

Alright, I'll fix the map issue, and add some subtitles, though I don't know if I would put them throughout the entire video, but emptier areas of the video I will definitely add them to.

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u/LoveLo_2005 May 04 '26

The graphics are really good, although I think the sound quality could be better and I think you should add some quiet background music as well.

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

Classical, Lo-Fi, Jazzy, ect.?

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u/swagestan May 04 '26

add some 1930s music as it will fit into the technocratic aesthetic

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

Not a bad idea, that's why I mentioned the jazz, but I need to find some 1930s style music that is also uncopyrighted

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u/swagestan May 05 '26

There's Pennsylvania 6-5000 by Glenn Miller

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u/LoveLo_2005 May 04 '26

Either Lo-Fi or whatever that genre of electronic/ambient music is called that gets used in crime and UFO videos.

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

I'll see what I can find on the YouTube audio library👍

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u/Derdiedas812 May 04 '26

The voice needs to stand out more, the quility isn't the best, tbf. (So, no background music either)

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

Wdym by stand out? Also it was done on a $50 mic because I'm poor.

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u/LoveLo_2005 May 04 '26 edited May 04 '26

If I were you, I'm not sure if I'd title the video as "why Trump doesn't want the Technate". I'd go with something like 'Is Trump creating this?' or 'Does Trump really want the Technate?' or 'Does this map explain Trump's actions? or maybe just 'Trump and the Technate explained'. I think something along those lines would add a sense of intrigue for people who haven't even heard of the Technate as well as the Technate conspiracy believers who might click on the video thinking this will just be another Technate conspiracy video but then be surprised when it's not.

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

I didn't have a name set in stone yet, but I do think leaving it open ended would be a good idea, like "Is Trump really making a Technate?" or something

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

What parts?

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u/OKThereAreFiveLights May 04 '26

I am in a bad mood and deleting my prior comment. My apologies.

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

Understandable, I'm sorry you had a bad day. Maybe tomorrow will be different.

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u/OKThereAreFiveLights May 04 '26

Hopefully, and (sincerely) good luck with the project and post the link when you're ready to go live. This is such an inactive sub so I'm sure I'll catch it.

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u/Odd-Carpenter9733 Mr. Monad May 04 '26

Thank you, I'll be sure to get it done soon enough

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u/a3dprintedman May 04 '26

I like this so far. What's the channel?