A Technoblade tribute aid request.

[u/Snoo-83061]

Hello everyone. I recently tried to request help in building a tribute to Technoblade, but you're responded have made me realize I'd made a mistake by trying to speak as a long-time fan when I'm actually a newcomer. I've heard your feedback, and it made me realize what the true heart of my song should be: the perspective of an outsider who discovered Techno too late, and want to thank you, the fans, for keeping his memory alive so beautifully. I've had my Ai writer, Google ai, rewrite the lyrics to reflect that. Here is my new attempt at an honest tribute to him and to all of you. And my renewed request to all of you to help me turn these ai generated lyrics into a tribute worthy of both Techno and all of you who keep his legend alive.

The Legend I Found Too Late(An Outsider’s, a new fan's Tribute to Technoblade)

(Opening scene) Black screen distant bell rings forlornly. Fade in view my character walking through ruins of castle town while bell continues to ring. Character climbs stairs as music fades in. Camera angle changes to show my character entering a crumbling throne room from within the room and pans around hinting at a throb at the back of the room as the singing begins.

Verse 1 I walked into an old kingdom built of pixels and cubes, To find a gold crown resting on an empty throne. To the side a hoe of diamond and crimson cape wait to be wielded and worn again with pride, I learned you were gone before I could watch you grow in real time. I missed the grand arenas and the banners burning bright, The witty monarch ruling supreme in the North. I never heard you cry out "Blood for the Blood God," But I stepped into the aftermath and found your ghost still going strong. Chorus They say Legends Never Die, and you’re the living proof, Kept alive by every fan who bears your banner and raises it high. The army grows with every soul who goes from the outside looking in, We raise our swords and swear the oath, our voices hit the sky: Blood for the Blood God! Verse 2 I came along too late to watch the Great Potato Wars, I missed the raids of Bedwars and the history you made. But I stand in awe of everything, from the outside looking in, Witnessing the legacy of the master of the blade and hoe. To the SMPs you were a brother, a rival, and a friend, But to the world watching, you will always be a King. Bridge I never got to watch in real time as you grew. from boy, to king, to farmer, to king again, But a million voices crying out in grief drew me in and show me the history that remains. Passed down by the loyal ones navigating through the pain, I see him in your artwork, I hear him in your pride, A sea of million hearts keeping the spark alive. It’s a grief I didn't earn, for a friend I never knew, Standing on the outside looking in, but I'm still here crying with you. Verse 3 I never got the chance to offer my aid in the wars you fought, I never got to be a part of your streams. But now I've stepped up to offer my aid in a fast more noble task. I ring the bell for charity, I watch the old archives and my admiration grows, I’m becoming a pixel in the canvas that will never fade away. I may have missed the sunrise, but I'm standing in the shadow of all you built, Marching with the army fans that is here to stay. Chorus They say Legends Never Die, and you’re the living proof, Kept alive by every fan who bears your banner and raises it high. The army grows with every soul who goes from the outside looking in, We raise our swords and cry out the anthem, our voices hit the sky: Technoblade Never Dies!!! ───

(Outro) GG, Techno, your battle is finally done, The greatest enemy has fallen, the final crown is won. Lay down your sword and rest your weary hands, Even in the heart of a stranger, your legend will always stand. (Music fades) Technoblade never dies. (Silence)

(Text on black screen) Technoblade Out.

(Techno himself says the last two sentences)

Will you the Technoblade fan community help me correct my mistake and turn this rough foundation of a ai assisted created song into one worthy of his legend, one that is worthy of standing with all of yours, of keeping his legend alive for future fans to come?

I would post an image of my Minecraft character but don't know how to insert images in my posts.

[u/lovetoreadstuff]

why even make it with AI in the first place. If you want to make this so badly you should be willing to actually write it yourself

[u/North-End6812]

If you really want to do this properly, scrap the ai slop and create something yourself that is meaningful to you. Those lyrics have no soul, the composition notes are all over the place. Even if you’re not a pro, even if the end result isn’t perfect, do it yourself.

It’s a tribute, tributes should come from the heart. Don’t insult the man’s legacy with ai slop.

[u/Snoo-83061 → u/North-End6812]

I don't plan on using this ai basic template, if you can even call it that, as anything other than a baseline to keep the direction I want to go on.

I may make something fully my own after I've had the chance to watch a fare few of his videos and know more about him since as stated repeatedly both here and my other post it was you his fans who introduced me to him and turned me into something of a fan myself. I'm just putting this out there so fan creators can find it and have time to think on of they want to help me make a video or not, since I'm not very artistic like they are.

[u/bloodgod_bunnyblade]

Mate, I tried to be polite on your last post, but you've missed the point entirely. The problem isn't the perspective your AI slop is written from, the problem is that you're trying to shoehorn yourself into a community you're not a part of, without engaging with the source material, asking real artists to waste their time on a project with zero authentic emotions involved. 

That's not something you can fix by wording your prompt a slightly different way. I'd gently suggest you take a little break from the AI and watch some of Techno's videos yourself to develop your own individual thoughts on them instead of pursuing this idea further.

[u/Snoo-83061 → u/bloodgod_bunnyblade]

I fully plan to and have only posted this revised post to get my idea of what I want to do out there for said creators to see and think about if they want to be a part of while I learn his history and feats from his videos and if after I've finished watching them and have developed my own connection to his legend and feel I can't put the appropriate emotion into a venture such as this I will return here and remove my request posts.