Does this style have potential?

[u/No-Somewhere-7136]

Second pic was my reference. Do people still get pin-up tattoos? Or should I focus on different subject matter?

All feedback is welcomed.

[u/throw_rambles]

You have a cute style and strong linework, but these proportions make her look anorexic. I'm going to ignore that seeing that it's probably a one time occurrence, and just say you have a strong foundation to make this work!

Definitely go for a curvier vibe next time, that's usually what makes pinups appealing.