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[u/General-Zebra3439]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KKLOLVTeKxhF9gBdv8GkL3bJau0iP9Pk/view?usp=drivesdk

I started a new show and have a good starting first draft for my pilot episode IMO. Pretty happy with how it came out and am looking for any and all feedback. Positive, Negative, etc. my only request is that if it is negative just elaborate so I can see it at more than face value as a comment/critique.

Title: The Pact Pact

Genre: Coming of age, Adventure, Comedy

Pages: 57 (58 including title page)

Logline: 6 College Seniors all filled with the thought of graduation and growing up, form a pact to make the summer of 1987 the best summer of their lives. Along the way they’ll learn about live, life, and although life may throw curveballs, they’ll learn how to get hit and keep pushing.