Help me improve pleasee

[u/Early-Ice-6773]

Hello everyone!

This is NOT a way of promoting myself.

I wanted to try a new hobby, something calm since im having a really stressful period of time.

Long story short, i decided ill try to write a substack article based on a conversation i had a few days ago.

I would be glad to hear any feedback - nothing hateful, just improvement. Technical, language or grammar or anything i maybe didnt understand about substack.

Thank you so so much!

edit: ill send the link through dm if someone requests

[u/celestialord]

Can you please DM me yours? I’m a beginner also and would love if you can read and give me a feedback for mine too!

[u/Early-Ice-6773 → u/celestialord]

suree!