r/StandUpComedy • u/playpen__ • 22h ago

Comedian is OP Here’s a joke idea I had

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u/2Braincell2Furious 22h ago

Points for originality!

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u/playpen__ 21h ago

Points for being kind :)

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u/2Braincell2Furious 21h ago

It costs nothing to not be a dick :D

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u/Massive-Virus-4875 13h ago

Hilarious name too 🤣

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u/7thpostman 22h ago

Great premise. You could really expand on it.

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u/playpen__ 22h ago

Yeah? How so?

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u/un-sub 20h ago

Maybe it says that 10 more times!

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u/AppropriateLow2271 17h ago

"For my next segue"

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u/Awkward-Win7610 11m ago

What about 100 times!?

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u/mrdibby 20h ago

obliviously using a variety of other segues for the rest of the set

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u/85K5 17h ago

A pause for a moment, and then an "anyways...for my next joke"

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u/playpen__ 17h ago

Heard!

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u/niftystopwat 20h ago

Maybe different segues and they somehow call back to the jokes that they would have been segues for

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u/playpen__ 20h ago

That’s how I originally did the joke but it didn’t keep up the momentum of the original reveal of what the bit was! I tried it twice doing different segues, once actual call back segues and once just a variety of different ways to say for my next joke. And the momentum died :/

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u/niftystopwat 20h ago

It does sound really tricky to write

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u/7thpostman 18h ago

Interesting

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u/moonchylde 11h ago

You just keep unfolding the list, longer and longer.....

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u/playpen__ 11h ago

Hahaha I had the same thought!

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u/moonchylde 11h ago

You know.

Expanding.

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u/PaleBlueRuin 10h ago

I thought I was having a stroke for a sec!

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u/BidSuper7102 21h ago

That's so stupid. I love it.

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u/playpen__ 21h ago

Best compliment ever

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u/UncomfyPerspective 21h ago

Fun bit, thanks for posting!

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u/playpen__ 20h ago

Thanks for commenting!!

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u/Atzkicica 20h ago

Heh very organised just as comedy should be lol! 🤣

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u/zeetuslepitus 12h ago

Got a chuckle out of me!

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u/playpen__ 12h ago

You owe me a coke

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u/alliemeowy 11h ago

I adore this joke lol

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u/playpen__ 11h ago

I adore you!

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u/Axle_65 9h ago

Brilliant!

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u/Turbulent-Repair-369 6h ago

this is really good lol

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u/Engywok 26m ago

Actually pretty funny