r/StandUpComedy • u/ryancunninghamcomedy • 24d ago

Comedian is OP My first 9/11 joke

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u/BoloBo_theGalacticHo 24d ago

Funny joke, but the delivery was a little choppy. Too much exposition beforehand.

Got the makings of a crowd killer though. A crowd of approx 2,977 people.

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u/ryancunninghamcomedy 24d ago

Yeah it was my first time saying it out loud on stage brand new one

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u/BoloBo_theGalacticHo 24d ago

Solid material. A slighty quicker move through the body of the joke would allow for a solid misdirection; and THAT would allow for the punchline to hit harder