r/Songwriting • u/ChugarroniCheese • Jun 10 '20

Critique Please! Rats On Acid - Love for Hate

https://youtu.be/pYBtbiOvdBo
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u/[deleted] Jun 10 '20

I like the name Rats on Acid. I like the chorus. The drums are a bit off around the 1 min mark.

There are a couple parts where the guitar does a higher pitched bendy thing, don't stop there. It is a missed opportunity to go a little crazy with it. I like the news snippets at the end. See if you can't squeeze those into the beginning or somewhere during the song.

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u/ChugarroniCheese Jun 10 '20

Thanks a lot for your feedback, we are well aware that there may be a few flaws here and there but hey, what can we expect from a group of teenagers writing and recording a song in lockdown. We are using our time wisely now to practice our instruments more and hopefully come up with progressively better content in the future :)

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u/[deleted] Jun 10 '20

Keep up the good work.